Friday, April 13, 2012

While Drinking my Peanut Butter Shake...

I have realized that I'm not sure if this story, "Untitled" :(, is going to be a short story or a novel. I can't really see the conclusion yet. I figure it'll go like it always does. I will write until the end comes. You see I don't set out with the end or even the middle already figured out. I will suddenly get a good idea or some moral dilemma that intrigues me, and I will make a story around it. It will come  as it comes and there isn't really a time frame... And yes, sometimes I will start like four things at one time and then forget about them. Environmentalists probably hate me because I use up so much paper. If trees were people I would be a notorious murderer. I really do waste a whole lot of paper. But now that I have a laptop I waste computer space and I loose flash drives. I still like writing things down in journals and notebooks. The outline for the last story I wrote took up two notebooks.... but I digress. Anyway I have, although I'm a day late, more of my story. Here you are,


                                         Untitled (Continued)
    
As the Doctor left the office he passed right beside the young girl bumping into her on his way out. She gave him a cute scrunch of her nose. It was meant to be angry but it had the opposite effect. It made Annie chuckle under her breath. There was a small moment in which the two just stared at each other. Curious expressions were on both of their faces and it lasted a few minutes until the girl started walking toward Annie. All but one of the nurses had left the room, Annie personal nurse was the one who remained. She had a stern face and was always frowning at Annie for some reason. The nurse motioned for  her to get up and follow her out to her room. After her weekly check- ups Annie usually returned to her room where she read or slept. Never anything more. She liked reading though; it was her favorite pass time (despite the fact that it was her only pass time). She thought that she could remember reading before she was brought here, but as always those memories faded into the cloud of her mind and vanished with all the other things she wished she could hold onto. Today was no different. She got up and walked toward the extended arm of her blatantly board nurse. As they headed out, the nurse in front and Annie behind, part of her mind wondered if the little girl would follow them. She did. The three women navigated the halls with ease. Even the little girl seemed to know where she was going. This didn’t make any sense though; the girl had never been to Annie’s room. She didn’t even know her. There was something about that girl, however, that suggested she did know Annie. It was eerie and uncomfortable but it made Annie want to talk to her more, to figure out how or if she knew her. This girl, however strange she was, gave Annie hope. If  they knew each other maybe she knew her family outside this place. Maybe she was even part of her past. This prospect was exciting and scary all at the same time. There was a chance that her past was painful. Or it could have been wonderful. Annie just didn't know.
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"Savanna. The pretty girl at the burger place. Her name is Savanna." "She doesn't know your name either. Ethan... It's Ethan."
He could not get the words out of his head. Ethan Hayes walked through the halls, his clipboard and pen in hand. He was due in the lab again for an analysis of the patients brain activity during the check up. They always did this and always came up with the same results. Testing had concluded that the patient was sane, but the incident where she'd seen the little girl in the corner was troubling. Ethan knew all of this as he walked down the hall. These were the things he knew he should be thinking about. But he couldn't focus on them for more than a minute before his mind went back to her voice and her eyes as she read his mind. She was trapped. She had appeared as if she wanted to stop when she'd spoken to him, but he wasn't certain that she could. When the nurses and scientist were first hired they were required to take several classes and read a few memo's about not getting attached to the patients. He was very well trained to be detached and aloof when it came to the people they used for experiments. He forgot all of that the second he saw her tired eyes and her sad voice. She did not want to be here. One thing their supervisors were quick to assure them of was that the patients were not here unwillingly. Most of the patients were orphans or abandoned. This one was no different. She probably had no where to go. She was most likely adopted by one of the scientists. That was what they did in some cases. Adopted the child then brought them here. Ethan had a growing desire to see the girl again. To hear about her situation. See if she had any family. There was no legal reason she couldn't leave. The supervisors would throw a fit though, after all the money they'd invested in her. He knew it was wishful thinking... she was just another orphan. He still hoped for her, however.

                                                              -KC-

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