I'm sorry but the stupidity of people baffles me. I actually heard someone use the phrase Alienist. How do people come up with this stuff? Even if Aliens are real, which I am really not convinced of, as cool as that possibility may be, they are undoubtedly laughing at us. I bet they have their governments system more organized than ours (they usually are advanced in the movies). I'm sorry if this makes me an Alienist, but if beings from outer space attack the earth I'm saying attack them back! Maybe, just maybe, they aren't friendly... I don't know what gave it away... maybe the shooting and the requests to harvest our body organs... its just me, but really... come on.
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| Don't trust him... |
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Any way I have more of my story written. I am no closer to coming up with a title than I was the last time we had this discussion. I'm not sure why coming up with a title is so hard for me. I just can't think of anything, not even a place holder. Seriously though, if you have any ideas get a hold of me. I would LOVE to hear them! My e-mail is at the top of this page, if ya got something e-mail me or comment on this post.
Alright, more of Untitled coming up!
Untitled Continued:
Finally the nurses,
Sinclair, and himself decided that in order to understand the girls mind more
thoroughly they would have to go directly to the girl herself.
Ethan called her nurse
and began setting up the equipment. They were going to administer another test.
Dr. Sinclair was very adamant about finding the root of Annie’s visions. Ethan
had always assumed that the patient’s best interest was at heart here, however,
he now knew that this was false. If the word money slipped out of Sinclair’s
mouth one more time Ethan was going to lose it. He was fishing through her
files for her previous test when he saw it. Her admissions form was sitting in
her file, beside her medical history and profile. He wasn’t sure what the law
was on peaking if he worked with her. He assumed he could probably get into
serious trouble. His curiosity was overwhelming and he wasn’t sure he could
help himself. Why wasn’t Sinclair answering any of his questions? If she was an
average patient like he claimed then why was he so excited about this recent
development? Her seeing visions? That didn’t seem like an unusual thing around
here. Was it not possible that she was just schizophrenic? It was possible to
develop a disease even after you have been tested for it. There was something
going on and Ethan knew it was wrong. There was a reason that Sinclair was so
adamant about keeping the girls identity a secret, and there was a reason that
he was so obsessed with her. This was why Ethan took the file. That was why he
slipped it into his pocket and lied about its whereabouts. This was when his
plan began to form.
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The girl wasn’t going
away. She stayed in Annie’s room with her, although they didn’t speak. She was
a very unusual little girl. She didn’t seem young, despite the way she
appeared. She seemed like she knew about life. But that didn’t fit her age. She
had the look of an adult rather than a child. She was unnerving and comforting
to Annie simultaneously. Regardless of this place she was also goofy. Annie
wished that she could be that way. Happy in spite of the grey walls, the loneliness,
and the treatments that always seemed to hurt. This was why she figured that the
young girl wasn’t a patient here. She was much to chipper. Exuberant was a
better word. She was always beaming, or playing... Most of the time both. While
in Annie’s room she had pulled out of her pocket a piece of chalk and drew on
the floor. Annie had protested but the girl didn’t seem to hear her. She drew
flowers and hopscotch squares on the floor. It was after she drew the squares that
she decided to notice Annie. She’d beckoned Annie to play with her. This was
what the nurse had walked in on. Annie hopping around the room alone attempting
to fit her feet perfectly into invisible squares. When asked for an explanation
she had stated simply, “The girl and I are playing hopscotch.” This was noT received
well. Annie’s nurse had taken her to the main lab for impromptu testing. This didn’t
make sense to Annie. She had already had her test that day and there were never
two. Once a week that was how it always was. Therefore this abrupt change
frightened her. What was wrong? Was it about the girl? She knew after the exchange
With Sinclair and the nurse that she was the only one who could see her. Did
that mean that the girl wasn’t real? Annie had never considered it but could
she possibly be going crazy? Was the girl only in her head? This option gave
Annie a strange sense of comfort. They couldn’t hurt her. That had been her
greatest fear. That they would take the smile out of the girls eyes. Like they
did with her. The second this thought popped into Annie's mind a feeling of possession
ran through her. She didn’t know specifics but she knew it was true. She used
to be like that little girl. Happy.
Hope you enjoyed :)
-KC-
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